Jump to content

GOF Hat page updated


Recommended Posts

I just re-did my Hat page... just covering some of the basics.

If you have a chance to check it out, please let me know if you see any anomalies (spelling, grammar, or context)

Thanks

http://www.gentlemenoffortune.com/hats.htm

GoF

Come aboard my pirate re-enacting site

http://www.gentlemenoffortune.com/

Where you will find lots of information on building your authentic Pirate Impression!

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Looks nice.

In the third paragraph under the "Hat Embellishments and Lining" section, the first sentence reads "Linings are very simply" as (probably) opposed to "simple."

In the second sentence under "Sources of Cocked / Tricorn Hats," you type "Goggle" instead of "Google." The fourth sentence in the same section should use "It's" as opposed to "Its".

Other than that, quite a good page! Just fix those errors (and the ones that others spot, if they do) and you're set.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Just a comment on a different part of your site (which is great, by the way). For the historic tall ship replicas page, you list the Batavia as an 18th Century East Indiaman, whereas she's a 17th Century vessel. You correctly mention that she was built in 1628 in the description, though.

Coastie :huh:

She was bigger and faster when under full sail

With a gale on the beam and the seas o'er the rail

sml_gallery_27_597_266212.jpg

Link to comment
Share on other sites

I just re-did my Hat page... just covering some of the basics.

If you have a chance to check it out, please let me know if you see any anomalies (spelling, grammar, or context)

Thanks

http://www.gentlemenoffortune.com/hats.htm

GoF

I would love to talk to you about doing a hat piece for Pirates Magazine. We are long overdue for such an article.

 

-1st Mate of Pirates Magazine

-Bladesmith/Owner of That Works Studio

http://youtube.com/thatworks

thatworks.shop

 

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Create an account or sign in to comment

You need to be a member in order to leave a comment

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Register a new account

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now
×
×
  • Create New...
&ev=PageView&cd%5Bitem_id%5D=12686&cd%5Bitem_name%5D=GOF+Hat+page+updated&cd%5Bitem_type%5D=topic&cd%5Bcategory_name%5D=Captain Twill"/>