Gentleman of Fortune Posted April 25, 2008 Posted April 25, 2008 I just re-did my Hat page... just covering some of the basics. If you have a chance to check it out, please let me know if you see any anomalies (spelling, grammar, or context) Thanks http://www.gentlemenoffortune.com/hats.htm GoF Come aboard my pirate re-enacting site http://www.gentlemenoffortune.com/ Where you will find lots of information on building your authentic Pirate Impression!
Jacob Cook Posted April 25, 2008 Posted April 25, 2008 Looks nice. In the third paragraph under the "Hat Embellishments and Lining" section, the first sentence reads "Linings are very simply" as (probably) opposed to "simple." In the second sentence under "Sources of Cocked / Tricorn Hats," you type "Goggle" instead of "Google." The fourth sentence in the same section should use "It's" as opposed to "Its". Other than that, quite a good page! Just fix those errors (and the ones that others spot, if they do) and you're set.
Coastie04 Posted April 25, 2008 Posted April 25, 2008 Just a comment on a different part of your site (which is great, by the way). For the historic tall ship replicas page, you list the Batavia as an 18th Century East Indiaman, whereas she's a 17th Century vessel. You correctly mention that she was built in 1628 in the description, though. Coastie She was bigger and faster when under full sail With a gale on the beam and the seas o'er the rail
1stMate Matt Posted April 28, 2008 Posted April 28, 2008 I just re-did my Hat page... just covering some of the basics.If you have a chance to check it out, please let me know if you see any anomalies (spelling, grammar, or context) Thanks http://www.gentlemenoffortune.com/hats.htm GoF I would love to talk to you about doing a hat piece for Pirates Magazine. We are long overdue for such an article. -1st Mate of Pirates Magazine -Bladesmith/Owner of That Works Studio http://youtube.com/thatworks thatworks.shop
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