Daniel Posted March 10, 2010 Share Posted March 10, 2010 I just wrote this sea shanty, to be sung by the crew of the Cynosure in my short novel The Treasure of Ashur MacBain, although I expect no more than a stanza or two will actually appear in the finished story. I conceived of it as a halyard shanty, but I'm not sure the rhythm is right for that. The one halyard shanty I know, Blow the Man Down, spaces the effort out more evenly between every line. This one sounds more like What Do You Do With a Drunken Sailor? or Santy Ano, capstan shanties where the sailors push several times on the chorus. It uses the tune of , with a longer pause between stanzas for the chorus.CRO'JACK WILL Oh, Cro'jack Will had squinty eyes And a broken nose stuck hard between An hundred stone o' fearsome size But the sorriest sailor I e'er ha' seen. Lads, heave! Lads, heave! The purser staked him for three pound So his lass and fry might room and eat He spent it all drinking whiskey down And his kin slept nights in Beaver Street. Lads, heave! Lads, heave! Cro'jack jump'd his ship in Bristol Town And married him a maiden true Eftsoons he blooded her wedding gown She found him gone, and dowry too. Lads, heave! Lads, heave! He pinched a purse, and a merry race The watchmen chased him aft and fore. As he sought himself a hiding place His eye lit on a man-o'-war. Lads, heave! Lads, heave! Cro'jack made his mark and shipped aboard And swore he was a fighter bold But when the French lay board and board He hid himself deep in the hold. Lads, heave! Lads, heave! When they dragged him up and it was heard That he left his mates to suffer death The Admirals sent down the word That the foreyard brace should choke his breath. Lads, heave! Lads, heave! Cro'jack laid aloft, hauled by his neck And a loom gale swung him to and fro. He cried to be let down on deck But instead to Hell he laid below. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
capn'rob Posted March 10, 2010 Share Posted March 10, 2010 If it is to be a Chantey you might consider the "Heave Lads" betwixt two line verse. It would be for an awful long haul were it not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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