Kendra The Sea Maid

Winter

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I.

The gray bitter cold of morn

Finds him in a leaf barren wood alone.

Feeling numb, heart frozen,

Is this the path he should have chosen?

He trecks on, face full of frost

Searching for that, which he has lost.

Morning turns to evening

And no hope of the ache ever leaving.

Long is this journey of despair

Which seems to be going no where.

He trecks on, face full of frost

Searching for that, which he has lost.

II.

Dark is the night to winter’s soul

An unyeilding chill that won’t let go.

Sitting by fire’s blaze,

His mind drifts into mist, and haze.

To that once warm, guilding light

To those soft arms that held him tight

Those lips filled with passion’s love

And a voice low like the cooing of a dove.

He trecks on, face full of frost

Searching for that, which he has lost.

©Shana L. Martin 2005 Largo, FL. All rights reserved

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Wow... fantastic! Sad, but really good! You can tell it's from your soul... I wish I could express myself like that!

:)

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Aye Kendra you are such an incredible poet.

But I think it be wise that it's best not to dwell on what may have been, but instead go bravely into the future and feel the sun's warmth upon your cheek.

Rumba Rue

** :lol: **

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Aye Kendra you are such an incredible poet.

But I think it be wise that it's best not to dwell on what may have been, but instead go bravely into the future and feel the sun's warmth upon your cheek.

Rumba Rue

** :lol: **

I so agree, that is why I say it is my last poem, done in this vain for awhile. Just need to get that last bit out! My hope is that when I share stuff like this, it gives a voice to those feelings others have a hard time expressing. I am trying to write a story a fantasy tale. eventually I will have to get back to my sequal to the mermaid story, but my mind just is on this other for now. and then there is our pirate fest coming in November. So it is safe to say that my meloncolly state is over and the warm summer sun is over head!

Thank for being so understanding all of you!

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Lass ye be a beacon o light fer us all. Please, nay stop, nay remit to the experience of the harshness of life we are.

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Well, Kendra...Ya never cese ta amaze this ole Pirate. Just when ya think ya reads em all, ya be poppin nother in me face. Great job lass. :rolleyes::huh:

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Very good, again. I just noticed you've left the pub, Kendra, but in case you come back and/or just to let everyone else know, I'm still going to post my thoughts.

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Thank you so much for posting your thoughts if you indeed had not I would not have come back. to be honest I thought the pub be dead. I am glad to be proven wrong

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Forum sites, especially ones for older generations(by that I mean people over 18 or at least with very little to attract people under the age of 18) tend to be somewhat slow. So far I have only seen one site that is active daily and it is for kids and adults alike, the theme there is anime. Compared to other forum sites of the same type, I'd say this one is relatively active.

I've decided I like the Pub and so am going to do what I can to make it as active as I can. As soon as I can get around to it, I'll be advertising to every pirate-enthusiast I know, the only problem we may encounter is that most of them aren't as into computers and forum sites as I am. Hopefully though we will see an increase in activity.

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